april+and+cody+think+ice+cream!!!!

Things we would change:

tener limpia la nieve, having clean snow availiable easily tienen sabors diferentes, have different flavors uso de hielo en vez de la nieve,use ice instead of snow lo mucho que hizo,how much we made

liked:

tirar la bolsa con hielo en la mismo, throwing the bag with the ice in it comer el helado,eating the ice cream llegar a mezclarlo a nosotros mismos,getting to mix it ourselves va a la nieve,going to get the snow hacer helados con los amigos,making ice cream with friends

Así es como hicimos helado en la clase de español. en primer lugar lo que hicimos fue obtener todos los ingredientes de nuestra organización. Ponemos todos los ingredientes ( excepto para la nieve ) en una pequeña bag.After cerramos la bolsa que lo sacudió todo. Luego tomó la bolsita de los ingredientes y ponerlo en una bolsa grande de snow.Then esperábamos que la bolsa se ​​convierta en un sólido. Así es como hemos hecho helado. La única cosa que podría cambiar es el sabor del helado. Perro esto fue muy divertido y era delicioso

Visuals: bolsa de plastico,Plastic Bag nieva o hielo,snow or ice vainilla,vanilla leche,milk azucar,sugar

Dislikes: de espera para el helado este listo, Waiting for the ice cream to be ready.

NOTES FROM MRS. DUNN
The final draft of this page should be in Spanish. it is - I disagree - Your lists are in English. Was there anything that you did not like? yes - Thank you for adding this. What are your visuals going to be? Please list them here! ok - Again, thank you for adding this, but it should be in Spanish. This should read like a real review. ? - The lists were for your planning. Now use the lists to create a evaluative discussion with your partner to present before the class. You really need to work on this page! What I see here is the result of 3 class periods of work! Your final draft is due by the end of class tomorrow! i want it on paper next time, i hate doing it online, moodle, edmodo, wikispaces etc. - Please see comments below. Your presentation will be next week! If you are unsure of anything that is expected of you, please ask!

*Please initial comments! I am not sure to whom I am speaking: April or Cody!

MORE NOTES! I understand that you may prefer to not do work online, however, we don't always get to do the things that we want. Also, part of my job is to prepare you for what to expect in the future: online collaboration, team planning and implementation, and so much more! You may hate this, and I really do understand that. What I ask of you is that you understand that I took your desire to "make ice cream in Spanish class" and turn it into a learning experience on several levels.

Even if you are dissastisfied with the format of the lesson, your job as a student is to do the work first, complete it on time, and then present your arguments/disagreements/comments later when your work is complete. Your rough draft grade is 10/20.